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Inspired by Suzette Richards poem/pic - “A Woman’s Longing

Lucia drowned herself in water fall. Her negligee meant for a celebration. Now, she’s swept away by her own tears. Climatic are the heights of her despair. In the throes of mourning, she’s defiant. Fall celebration ~ now climatic mourning.

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Date: 12/28/2024 4:59:00 PM
This seems to have a grief affect. It's beautiful poetry.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2024 5:06:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs and Happy New Year!
Date: 12/24/2024 7:47:00 PM
Somehow, I only see the mourning, not the 'morning.' I like it that way though. ~ One-eyed Jack
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2024 7:55:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs and happy holidays, sweet friend!
Date: 12/24/2024 6:13:00 AM
Light diminishes and heightens depending on the season...only love is constant when more spiritual and less climatic. Deep poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2024 6:29:00 AM
Thanks, Joe! Yes, things change. I appreciate your comment,
Date: 12/24/2024 1:21:00 AM
I don't know whether I should cry or laugh. I'll do both. Happy Christmas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2024 6:28:00 AM
Happy Christmas, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim

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