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Inspired by Suzette Richards poem/pic - “A Woman’s Longing

Fall Celebration

Lucia drowned herself in water fall.
Her negligee meant for a celebration.
Now, she’s swept away by her own tears.
Climatic are the heights of her despair.
In the throes of mourning, she’s defiant.
Fall celebration ~ now climatic mourning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 4:59 PM
This seems to have a grief affect. It's beautiful poetry.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Paige! Hugs and Happy New Year!
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 7:47 PM
Somehow, I only see the mourning, not the 'morning.' I like it that way though. ~ One-eyed Jack
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Thank you! Hugs and happy holidays, sweet friend!
DiMino Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Light diminishes and heightens depending on the season...only love is constant when more spiritual and less climatic. Deep poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:29 AM
Thanks, Joe! Yes, things change. I appreciate your comment,
Buhagiar Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 1:21 AM
I don't know whether I should cry or laugh. I'll do both. Happy Christmas.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Happy Christmas, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
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