fall boughs

frail boughs in the wind
swaying to the forlorn rhythm...
leaves fall gracefully 


November 15, 2025.
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Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 10:02 AM
So pretty. Congrats on the win
Emate Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 7:02 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm honoured.
Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 1:39 AM
Your haiku beautifully captures a melancholic autumn scene. Great win Thompson..
Emate Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Thank you, Jenish. It's an honour.
Kitchin Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 4:28 AM
Thompson, congratulations on your winning placement. I enjoyed the moving fall imagery in your haiku.
Emate Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, Tania. I'm honoured.
Alex Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 9:08 PM
"leaves fall gracefully" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Emate Avatar
December 20, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. It's an honour.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Hello Thompson Enate, When the wind is strong and the boughs are weak they will fall to the ground. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Hello Thompson, Your welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. / Darlene/
Emate Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:18 AM
Haha! Thank you, Darlene, for stopping by. I'm honoured.
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