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Fall Ambrosia

fall's cool breeze tip-toes
                                     jasmine oozes ambrosia  
                                     amber dusk descends 
               



                                           September 2, 2021
                             For " Favourite Nature Haiku" Contest
                                  Sponsor: Constance La France
                           Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com
                                              SECOND PLACE
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La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your wonderful Haiku, well done ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Congrats on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Wonderful job. Congratulations.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend...............
Kauffman Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Delicious and delightful dear friend! This sumptuous write overflows with the glory of the rainbow's essence of color and taste in lovely alliteration! Congratulations on your win! I always have trouble letting go of summer but you have whetted my appetite for a fall feast! Much love to you and a hug!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Dear Sam, Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Your mesmerizing comments inspire me to write more - an uplifting comment from a truly gifted poet! Love ~ Mala
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