Fall Afternoon

sun whispering low through thin wispy clouds of gray late fall afternoon
written October 2, 2021
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 12:47 PM
In twelve words you have set a pretty scene.
Hankins Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Aw, thanks. I like this one myself.
Skelly Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 5:24 AM
I love autumn, when the air is crisp and breathable...Delice
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October 3, 2021 at 8:55 AM
It's not my favorite time of the year because it portends winter, but I do love when the air is breathable. Unfortunately, here in Kentucky, at this time we have mold!
Radice Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 12:58 AM
I'm there walking as I read Milt. Just recently we were walking in the sun yet there was an Autumn chill in the air. Your words brought that walk back. Cheers - Gary
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October 3, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Thanks so much, Gary. I see that you have another fantastic poem on the Top 100 list. I really enjoy your writing; you are a very talented poet.
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