Fall Afternoon

sun whispering low through thin wispy clouds of gray late fall afternoon written October 2, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/6/2021 12:47:00 PM

In twelve words you have set a pretty scene.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2021 1:07:00 PM

Aw, thanks. I like this one myself.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/3/2021 5:24:00 AM

I love autumn, when the air is crisp and breathable...Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2021 8:55:00 AM

It's not my favorite time of the year because it portends winter, but I do love when the air is breathable. Unfortunately, here in Kentucky, at this time we have mold!

Gary Radice

Date: 10/3/2021 12:58:00 AM

I'm there walking as I read Milt. Just recently we were walking in the sun yet there was an Autumn chill in the air. Your words brought that walk back. Cheers - Gary

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2021 9:02:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gary. I see that you have another fantastic poem on the Top 100 list. I really enjoy your writing; you are a very talented poet.