Fall

an ember-colored leaf spirals gently onto the pond's skin

autumnbeautyearthimagerylifemonoku

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Messoh Vincent

August 18, 2016 at 12:53 AM

Wow, so great!!! I like the unique style and it fully serves the explosive quality of poetry.

Teddy Kimathi

August 18, 2016 at 4:02 AM

Thank you Messoh, for your kind comment!! :-)

Paul Callus

July 22, 2016 at 10:32 AM

This excellent one liner has served you well, Teddy! Another merited podium finish...well done...congratulations! // paul

Teddy Kimathi

July 25, 2016 at 2:52 AM

Thank you so much Paul, for your kind applause!! :-)

Sara Kendrick

July 20, 2016 at 7:42 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Teddy Kimathi

July 20, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Thank you so much, Sara!! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2016 at 2:56 PM

this is the first one I am seeing on that list with outstanding imagery. though others have great messages,I LOVE this image in yours.

Teddy Kimathi

July 19, 2016 at 3:07 PM

WOW!!!! :-O Thank you so much, Andrea!! *^_^*

Alexis Y.

July 18, 2016 at 2:59 PM

Hi Teddy, You painted a beautiful picture with a few words. Congrats on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 3:51 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis!! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

July 18, 2016 at 10:32 AM

Such vivid imagery, I like it. Congrats Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 3:49 PM

Thank you so much, Sunita!! *^_^*

Jesse Day

July 18, 2016 at 12:05 AM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:28 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Jesse!! :-)

Charlie Smith

July 17, 2016 at 9:13 PM

Lovely Teddy, congratulations ...

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:26 AM

Thank you very much for your applause, Charlie!! :-)

Sandra Haight

July 17, 2016 at 6:52 PM

Teddy, congrats on your placement in the one-liner contest! Sandra

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:25 AM

Thank you so much Sandra, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Tom Arnone

July 17, 2016 at 6:24 PM

I really like that imagery. Congrats on your placement! :-)

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:23 AM

Thank you so much Tom, for your applause and enjoying my piece!! :-)

Phillip Garcia

July 17, 2016 at 5:54 PM

Very nice, love it

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:21 AM

Thank you so much, Phillip!! :-)

Beautiful Scars

July 17, 2016 at 5:43 PM

Teddy, wow, I love this!congrats on your placement in the one liner contest :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:20 AM

Hi Laura. Thank you so much for your sweet applause!! *^_^*

Skat A

July 17, 2016 at 4:55 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Teddy Kimathi

July 18, 2016 at 10:18 AM

Thanks so much for your kind applause, Skat!! *^_^* Have a happy day too!! *_^

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2016 at 7:32 PM

Teddy, you chose a really pretty one for this contest. Congrats for the win.

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:17 AM

Thanks for your applause, Andrea!!! :-)

Paul Callus

April 14, 2016 at 11:16 AM

I love the image you project, Teddy! Very deserving of a top placed win! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:16 AM

Thank you so much Paul, for your applause!!! :-)

Charlie Smith

April 14, 2016 at 11:07 AM

Beautiful win Teddy...

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:14 AM

Thank you Charlie!!! :-)

Bl Devnath

April 14, 2016 at 7:40 AM

Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Teddy Kimathi

April 15, 2016 at 7:12 AM

Thank you so much BL!!! :-)

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2016 at 8:39 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Teddy Kimathi

April 14, 2016 at 4:22 AM

Lolest!!!! Ok Linda!!! ;-) Thank you so much for your sweet applause!!! *^_^*

Carrie Richards

April 13, 2016 at 8:11 PM

Love this.........."skin".....such a perfect word to polish this lovely image !! Congratulations!!

Teddy Kimathi

April 14, 2016 at 4:20 AM

Thank you so much Carrie!!! *^_^*

Vladislav Raven

February 17, 2016 at 9:44 PM

Hi Teddy, a beautiful Monoku from your heart, from your pen. Such a peaceful vision. A seven for this vision of peace....Vlad.

Teddy Kimathi

April 1, 2016 at 6:33 AM

Thank you so much Vlad. I'm greatly honored. :-)

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2016 at 7:22 PM

a beauty.

Teddy Kimathi

January 28, 2016 at 6:35 AM

Thanks Andrea! *^_^* <3

Susan Gentry

January 27, 2016 at 2:33 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Teddy Kimathi

January 28, 2016 at 6:30 AM

Thank you so much Susan! *^_^*

Skat A

January 26, 2016 at 11:29 AM

TEDDY, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT *8

Teddy Kimathi

January 28, 2016 at 3:52 AM

Thanks Skat! *^_^*

Balveen Cheema

January 25, 2016 at 7:12 AM

Poetic! Congrats on your well deserved placement, Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi

January 28, 2016 at 3:51 AM

Thanks so much Balveen! :-)

James Inman

January 25, 2016 at 7:01 AM

Great visual, Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi

January 28, 2016 at 3:49 AM

Thank you so much James! :-)

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