Fall

The wind is blowing,
the leaves rustle in rhythm – 
fall is in the air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Newman Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Excellent word choice and overall clarity Like it... miken
Andemariam Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 4:09 AM
Thanks! I wrote it in my poetry class. :)
Allison Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 1:47 AM
very clever haiku I love these forms where so few words say so much:-) Hugs jan xx
Andemariam Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 4:10 AM
Thank you Jan! :)
Meade Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 8:52 PM
I like it -- good play on the word fall -- season and leaves are falling . . . very clever. A 7 rating from me.
Andemariam Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 4:11 AM
Why thank you David, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :)
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