Fall

sliding carpet;
leaves gently move
under the tree

artimagerynatureseasonshaiku

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David Mohn

July 3, 2014 at 6:46 PM

Beautiful Haiku Teddy...very descriptive with so few syllables

Teddy Kimathi

July 4, 2014 at 4:46 AM

Thank you very much for your applause David! :-)

Jan Allison

June 29, 2014 at 4:49 PM

Very descriptive a worthy winner. Hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 4:08 AM

Thanks Jan! ^_^

Nette Onclaud

June 29, 2014 at 3:40 PM

lovely write and well-crafted 'ku, teddy... best cheers to you on your outstanding win... huggs

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 4:07 AM

I appreciate your visit and applause Nette! Thank you! ^_^

Donna Jones

June 29, 2014 at 12:50 PM

Love this very descriptive picture...many congratulations

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 4:04 AM

Thank you very much Donna! ^_^

Pandita Sietesantos

June 29, 2014 at 11:09 AM

Hi Teddy, I extend a huge congratulations to you for your great win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards, my friend.

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 3:58 AM

Hi buddy! Thank you very much for your kind applause! ^_^

Arlene Smith

June 29, 2014 at 7:34 AM

Congrats on a great win, Teddy! Such a lovely hiaku.. Hugs.. Arlene

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 2:16 AM

Thank you so much Arlene! ^_^

Mohan Chutani

June 29, 2014 at 6:40 AM

Teddy, congrats for nice win on fall's slide show of leaves. Mohan

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 2:14 AM

Lol. Thanks for your wonderful applause Mohan! ^_^

Elaine George

June 29, 2014 at 5:52 AM

I AGREE WITH PAUL. MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR TOP PLACE WIN, TEDDY. ELAINE

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 1:24 AM

Thank you so much Elaine! ^_^

Paul Callus

June 29, 2014 at 5:23 AM

A 7 rating for this beautiful haiku, Teddy!! That first line did it for me! Congratulations on a deserved win. // paul

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 1:15 AM

I appreciate your praise form my work Paul! ^_^

Connie Marcum Wong

June 29, 2014 at 3:30 AM

I agree with what Andrea said. A brilliant haiku this is, deserving of your winning honors. Kudos!

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 1:14 AM

Thank very much Connie! ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2014 at 10:30 PM

Teddy have I read your work before? I don't think so. Anyway, I just LOVED this haiku. The illusion of the sliding carpet wowed me. Congrats for your win. I gave you a special mention at my blog.

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 1:12 AM

Thank you for applauding my work, and featuring me in your blog Andrea!!! ^_^

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