Fall

sliding carpet; leaves gently move under the tree

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David Mohn

Date: 7/3/2014 6:46:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Teddy...very descriptive with so few syllables

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2014 4:46:00 AM

Thank you very much for your applause David! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2014 4:49:00 PM

Very descriptive a worthy winner. Hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 4:08:00 AM

Thanks Jan! ^_^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2014 3:40:00 PM

lovely write and well-crafted 'ku, teddy... best cheers to you on your outstanding win... huggs

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 4:07:00 AM

I appreciate your visit and applause Nette! Thank you! ^_^

Donna Jones

Date: 6/29/2014 12:50:00 PM

Love this very descriptive picture...many congratulations

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 4:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Donna! ^_^

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:09:00 AM

Hi Teddy, I extend a huge congratulations to you for your great win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards, my friend.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 3:58:00 AM

Hi buddy! Thank you very much for your kind applause! ^_^

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 7:34:00 AM

Congrats on a great win, Teddy! Such a lovely hiaku.. Hugs.. Arlene

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 2:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Arlene! ^_^

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/29/2014 6:40:00 AM

Teddy, congrats for nice win on fall's slide show of leaves. Mohan

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 2:14:00 AM

Lol. Thanks for your wonderful applause Mohan! ^_^

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 5:52:00 AM

I AGREE WITH PAUL. MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR TOP PLACE WIN, TEDDY. ELAINE

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 1:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Elaine! ^_^

Paul Callus

Date: 6/29/2014 5:23:00 AM

A 7 rating for this beautiful haiku, Teddy!! That first line did it for me! Congratulations on a deserved win. // paul

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 1:15:00 AM

I appreciate your praise form my work Paul! ^_^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/29/2014 3:30:00 AM

I agree with what Andrea said. A brilliant haiku this is, deserving of your winning honors. Kudos!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 1:14:00 AM

Thank very much Connie! ^_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 10:30:00 PM

Teddy have I read your work before? I don't think so. Anyway, I just LOVED this haiku. The illusion of the sliding carpet wowed me. Congrats for your win. I gave you a special mention at my blog.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 1:12:00 AM

Thank you for applauding my work, and featuring me in your blog Andrea!!! ^_^