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this season fall near my farm land leaves fell with trees

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Date: 12/20/2024 3:32:00 PM
Certainly touched this 'fellers brain's I'm most Apologetic but I felt ' I just could not leaf it out' The comment I mean.' Enjoyed the read you gave.'
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Date: 12/22/2024 6:18:00 PM
Your kind visit and words means much to me dear poet. I am glad you liked this. Word 'enough' should be taught before alphabets, there is no stopping human destruction dear poet. My farm is near Bandipur forest. The forest is disappearing at an alarming rate. I feel so sad as I can do nothing. I appreciate your comments. Thank you very much, a blessing it is.
Date: 9/23/2024 12:04:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 9/24/2024 9:03:00 PM
Thank you for the blessings dear poet. I am thankful for your visit and kind words. Cheers.
Date: 9/22/2024 12:10:00 PM
Back with my congrats, dear poet.
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Date: 9/22/2024 6:19:00 PM
Dear poet friend, you bring joy with your visit and happy words. So kind and sweet of you. I am grateful for your visit dear poet. Cheers.
Date: 9/20/2024 3:22:00 PM
Sheesh! Why do authorities think that the answer to all problems is to cut down a tree? A timely write, Thriveni. Enjoyed.
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Date: 9/20/2024 5:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you take this as 'a timely write'. I appreciate your sentiments. how would the world be if poets would rule!? ah. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/19/2024 10:53:00 PM
I would love to see that, do you get autumnal leaves there? Where do you live talented soul? Very well written for the form! Enjoyed reading this! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/20/2024 5:28:00 PM
your kind visit and words means so much to me. We do get autumnal leaves in SouthIndia. I am glad you liked this dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/18/2024 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Clever, thriveni. Happened here in our subdivision five years ago - so many trees cut down to make room for houses. AND a new-owner contract that required us to plant two trees on our new property.
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Date: 9/18/2024 8:57:00 PM
It is good to know about planting trees. Better if tree transplantation helps. Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I appreciate your comments. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/18/2024 7:28:00 AM
Thriveni, CONGRATS on your win. Knowing that deforestation is a problem there increases the depth of your poem! Janice
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Date: 9/18/2024 8:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it. thank you for your thoughts dear friend, Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/17/2024 8:37:00 PM
Beautiful image. Congrats!
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Date: 9/17/2024 9:15:00 PM
Thank you for your pleasant visit dear poet. Your happy words bring me a smile, thank you for the joy. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/17/2024 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Thriveni. Do you have four seasons in India? The Philippines has two seasons, dry and rainy seasons.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 9/17/2024 9:14:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and happy words dear poet. Yes we too are facing the extremes. Deforestation is now a problem with no solution. Thank you for your interest dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/17/2024 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations, Thriveni! Enjoyed the Fall imagery!
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Date: 9/17/2024 9:12:00 PM
Thank you very much for the placement and happy message. I am grateful for the joy. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/13/2024 6:16:00 AM
I enjoyed seeing your than-bauk today. I guess this contest has yet to be judged. Good luck. I like reading this form.
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Date: 9/17/2024 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much dear poet. yes it is nice variant form.
Date: 9/6/2024 11:59:00 AM
I loved reading your wonderful "fall" write. A great time of the year... Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 9/9/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thank you dear cheerful poet. I am ever happy by your kind visit and am grateful for your time. thank you for the blessings. Cheers.
Date: 9/5/2024 10:42:00 AM
Hi Thriveni, your poem is choke full of images that express big concepts o the season of fall, farms and trees that are falling like leaves. Such a sad ending. It is tragic to see trees falling over. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.
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Date: 9/9/2024 5:49:00 AM
I am grateful for your kind words and blessings dear poet. your words means so much to me. thank you.
Date: 9/2/2024 9:33:00 AM
Dear Threvini, I feel sadness as the “leaves fell with trees” instead of just autumn leaves falling from trees. Your poem’s imagery is potent, evocative and emotive. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/2/2024 8:49:00 PM
Dear poet, your kind words beautify my thoughts. Thank you for this precious visit. I am grateful for your blessings dear poet.
Date: 8/31/2024 1:59:00 PM
Pretty one, Thriveni. I want to try this challenge.
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Date: 9/1/2024 10:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. You'll like it. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 8/30/2024 9:32:00 PM
A wonderful image of fall painted in your than-bauk my dear poet friend. I haven't tried this type of poem yet but it looks so good. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Date: 8/31/2024 5:37:00 AM
It is a new form for me too, I tried to squeeze my thoughts into so small container! Your words emboldens me now.. haha. thank you for your kindness. I am grateful for the blessings dear poet. Cheers.
Date: 8/30/2024 11:24:00 AM
Hello Thrivene, I enjoyed your poem and the message. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/31/2024 5:35:00 AM
Thank you for this kind visit dear poet. Yes sir, one heavy hand felled & smuggled 240 red sandalwood trees aged 300 years, worth millions. we- mute spectators. Your words are blessings, I hold them dear. thank you Sir.

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