Fall-

fall-
ing again
as I pick up
speed and begin to
feel the consistency and
comfort of my life fall further
than I could possibly find an escape
from this time with so much of it being
lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 13, 2009 at 1:58 PM
I love the way this poem moves so rapidly before the admission that the subject feels "lost." Stirring and intriguing, Nicholas! Love, Carolyn
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