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Fall

The leaves are falling Falling from the trees outside It has to be Fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/28/2008 10:03:00 PM
Elizabeth, Another Great Haiku but are the leaves different colors I live in the Mountains and a strong wind can cause the leaves to fall in the spring ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:19:00 PM
Nice haiku, I can picture the leaves falling...Raul
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Date: 12/16/2008 5:29:00 PM
Good tribute to the fall......................Nice
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Date: 12/4/2008 4:39:00 PM
Interesting use of repetition. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/20/2008 8:46:00 PM
It paints a very pretty picture. I'm glad you liked my Haiku. I'm just trying my hand at it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Robin
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Date: 11/19/2008 2:19:00 PM
sure does beautiful time of year, it brings out the poet in us.
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