Fall

The leaves are falling Falling from the trees outside It has to be Fall.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/28/2008 10:03:00 PM

Elizabeth, Another Great Haiku but are the leaves different colors I live in the Mountains and a strong wind can cause the leaves to fall in the spring ALWAYS...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/16/2008 6:19:00 PM

Nice haiku, I can picture the leaves falling...Raul

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/16/2008 5:29:00 PM

Good tribute to the fall......................Nice

Date: 12/4/2008 4:39:00 PM

Interesting use of repetition. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/20/2008 8:46:00 PM

It paints a very pretty picture. I'm glad you liked my Haiku. I'm just trying my hand at it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Robin

James Foulk

Date: 11/19/2008 2:19:00 PM

sure does beautiful time of year, it brings out the poet in us.