Fall

november comes fall leaves and rain cover dark grass hunting season starts For: A late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest Date: 11-4-2019

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FJ Thomas

Date: 12/4/2020 12:42:00 PM

Uhoh... wear your safety colors! Hi Cas :)

poemtheart poemtheart

Date: 1/1/2020 12:44:00 AM

nice.. :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/25/2019 4:10:00 AM

The trappings of winter. A bit of an unfair contest because the animals cannot shoot back. Nicely penned. Happy Seasons Greetings, Kai

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2019 10:29:00 AM

Watch out Bambi! Hugs Rick.

Bette Bavington

Date: 11/26/2019 3:23:00 PM

Interesting piece. It gives us a haunting reframe that animals lives are about to end and feasting will soon begin. Nicely done.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 6:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Casarah. Well done.

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2019 8:03:00 AM

Nice one....Great last line which can be interpreted in different ways..

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2019 1:21:00 AM

very descriptive Cas, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2019 4:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Casarah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2019 7:55:00 PM

hi, there, Casarah, long time no see. I am glad to see you on this winner list. Congrats!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/7/2019 7:53:00 PM

Casarah, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku, thanks for participating!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/7/2019 7:46:00 PM

Hunting season starts way too soon here in N.J. U.S. but, as a hunter myself. well, ex-hunter (lol) this is a wonderful haiku. Congrats my friend on your win in Tania's contest. ~Charlie