Fall

november comes fall

leaves and rain cover dark grass

hunting season starts




For: A late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
Date: 11-4-2019

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FJ Thomas

December 4, 2020 at 12:42 PM

Uhoh... wear your safety colors! Hi Cas :)

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January 1, 2020 at 12:44 AM

nice.. :)

Kai Michael Neumann

December 25, 2019 at 4:10 AM

The trappings of winter. A bit of an unfair contest because the animals cannot shoot back. Nicely penned. Happy Seasons Greetings, Kai

Richard Lamoureux

November 30, 2019 at 10:29 AM

Watch out Bambi! Hugs Rick.

Bette Bavington

November 26, 2019 at 3:23 PM

Interesting piece. It gives us a haunting reframe that animals lives are about to end and feasting will soon begin. Nicely done.

Line Gauthier

November 13, 2019 at 6:51 AM

Congrats on your win, Casarah. Well done.

Silent One

November 10, 2019 at 8:03 AM

Nice one....Great last line which can be interpreted in different ways..

Jan Allison

November 9, 2019 at 1:21 AM

very descriptive Cas, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 8, 2019 at 4:58 AM

- Congratulations on your great win, Casarah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2019 at 7:55 PM

hi, there, Casarah, long time no see. I am glad to see you on this winner list. Congrats!

Tania Kitchin

November 7, 2019 at 7:53 PM

Casarah, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku, thanks for participating!

Charles Messina

November 7, 2019 at 7:46 PM

Hunting season starts way too soon here in N.J. U.S. but, as a hunter myself. well, ex-hunter (lol) this is a wonderful haiku. Congrats my friend on your win in Tania's contest. ~Charlie