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Fake World

In the world when I opened my eyes, I Could see the shinning and brightening of light Everything was very good, Just like a bag full of books But time to time when I was growing, I could see the changes in everybody’s mind These people were acting like they were all yours, But deep inside they were hating your sole They call you their best friends, But in reality they were your worst friends They becomes seriously ill, When they saw you taking a step out of there will But beware of these thunder pins, Because they teach you how to win Therefore I call this world, A complete fake world, an absolute fake world.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/11/2017 5:37:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS IN BRENDA'S HATERS CONTEST. So true as we grow older we see the darkness in this world and sadly we let it start to grow in us. This is because flesh is weak and selfish desires become the norm in this harsh world we must survive in!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/18/2017 7:59:00 AM

A very beautiful write, yeah you re absolutely correct about the world, nobody is yours, you can t really trust anyone, but this is what the world is, a test, a test we all have to pass to emter eternal life, have the fun of heavens, we just need to hang around there and always remember our God, Allah the Al mighty, good luck with your upcoming poems

Ibtihaj Rasheed
Date: 11/18/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thankyou Faraz Ajmal for your appreciation. No matter whatsoever the World is but a person should always do his best to help the World. Surely God will reward you..