Ibtihaj Rasheed Poet Rhyme

Fake World

In the world when I opened my eyes,
I Could see the shinning and brightening of light

Everything was very good, 
Just like a bag full of books 

But time to time when I was growing,
I could see the changes in everybody’s mind 
 
These people were acting like they were all yours, 
But deep inside they were hating your sole 
 
They call you their best friends, 
But in reality they were your worst friends 
 
They becomes seriously ill, 
When they saw you taking a step out of there will 
 
But beware of these thunder pins, 
Because they teach you how to win  
 
Therefore I call this world, 
A complete fake world, an absolute fake world.

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Robert Lindley December 11, 2017 at 5:37 PM CONGRATULATIONS IN BRENDA'S HATERS CONTEST. So true as we grow older we see the darkness in this world and sadly we let it start to grow in us. This is because flesh is weak and selfish desires become the norm in this harsh world we must survive in!

Faraz Ajmal November 18, 2017 at 7:59 AM A very beautiful write, yeah you re absolutely correct about the world, nobody is yours, you can t really trust anyone, but this is what the world is, a test, a test we all have to pass to emter eternal life, have the fun of heavens, we just need to hang around there and always remember our God, Allah the Al mighty, good luck with your upcoming poems Ibtihaj Rasheed November 18, 2017 at 4:01 PM Thankyou Faraz Ajmal for your appreciation. No matter whatsoever the World is but a person should always do his best to help the World. Surely God will reward you..