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Fake Love

A LOVE IN YOUR HEART NOT PURE FROM THE VERY START BECAUSE OF YOUR HATE TO THE PERSON WHO HURT YOU AND GAVE YOU THE GREATEST PAIN

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/8/2012 1:19:00 AM

Nice write Maria! It's sad when past actions determine our present emotions.

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/7/2012 11:28:00 AM

Reminds me of the chaos that mistrust can manifest in a naive mind and heart Maria - important message here - J.A.B. %

Shirin Neshat

Date: 10/7/2012 4:16:00 AM

so true. i learn is not good to date someone who isnt over there ex.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/6/2012 10:03:00 PM

ohhhh....fake love but poem isn't fake as your gem was gauged in my pawnshop, lol... great write my friend!!! keep up the good work!!! good luck and best wishes always!!!! love and hugs:) Leonora

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2012 3:53:00 PM

Interesting work..Yes, people can carry some more baggage around in life..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2012 11:38:00 AM

Fake love - (watch out for "copy" - "copy" will soon be broken .......) Good written dear Maria. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/6/2012 11:47:00 AM

oppps I think i will change my title hahahah thanks friend Anne Lise for your comments :) good day