Fake Love

A LOVE IN YOUR HEART

NOT PURE FROM THE VERY START

BECAUSE OF YOUR HATE

TO THE PERSON WHO HURT YOU

AND GAVE YOU THE GREATEST PAIN
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 1:19 AM
Nice write Maria! It's sad when past actions determine our present emotions.
Bordner Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Reminds me of the chaos that mistrust can manifest in a naive mind and heart Maria - important message here - J.A.B. %
Neshat Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 4:16 AM
so true. i learn is not good to date someone who isnt over there ex.
Gasun Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:03 PM
ohhhh....fake love but poem isn't fake as your gem was gauged in my pawnshop, lol... great write my friend!!! keep up the good work!!! good luck and best wishes always!!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 3:53 PM
Interesting work..Yes, people can carry some more baggage around in life..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Fake love - (watch out for "copy" - "copy" will soon be broken .......) Good written dear Maria. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 11:47 AM
oppps I think i will change my title hahahah thanks friend Anne Lise for your comments :) good day
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