Fake

The lies you told me, The things you said, The things I believed you say, The things we did, All the lies you told me, We end up here at this point in time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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C Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 4:40 PM
it's very interesting... much shorter than my own, but i can't judge based on size. and anyway, those 6 short lines say everything; no need to say more! good work :)
Alldredge Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Sounds as if someone really broke your heart also. There is someone that will love you the way you deserve out their, I promise. Enjoyed and liked reading your work.
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 10:43 AM
i really hate a liar. this poem was good and shows where all those lies will take you. Jo
Bourner Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:57 PM
same as Lynette :) ------Ell
Chachere Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:54 PM
And fake they are. -Always&Forever Lynette
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