Fake

One night Mr. Toothpick had a toothache Unable to find a painkiller, he kept awake Mr. Toothpick kept groaning Mrs. Toothpick slept moaning Both of them thought each other to be fake. 13.6.2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/17/2020 1:32:00 PM

Ha, ha! Perfect. Exactly how the soap opera we call 'married life' works!! Bravo, Mohan. A FAVE for me! Thanks, gw

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2020 7:46:00 AM

Thanx GW. Agree with you. Mohan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/17/2020 4:17:00 AM

No trust there then lol. Congrats on your win Mohan. Tom

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2020 7:47:00 AM

Tom, it's part and parcel of a conjugal life. Mohan

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 3:16:00 AM

This is witty and a perfect limerick Mohan. Congratulations on your win :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/22/2020 7:48:00 AM

Aditi, happy that it managed to tickle. Thanks. Mohan

Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2020 6:10:00 PM

Smiling at your originality, Mohan :) Enjoyed ~ Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2020 9:35:00 PM

Paul, nice to hear you smiling. Mohan

Jan Allison

Date: 6/16/2020 1:57:00 PM

ouch! many congrats Mohan:-) hugs jan xx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2020 9:35:00 PM

Jan, thanx.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2020 1:56:00 PM

A nice effort, Mohan. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2020 9:36:00 PM

Carolyn, thanks for your appreciation and encouragement. Mohan

Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 7:49:00 AM

hahahaha.. Witty and cute. I love this.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2020 9:37:00 PM

Funom, glad you liked it. Mohan