Fake

One night Mr. Toothpick had a toothache
Unable to find a painkiller, he  kept awake
Mr. Toothpick kept groaning
Mrs. Toothpick slept moaning
Both of them thought each other to be fake.

13.6.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Ha, ha! Perfect. Exactly how the soap opera we call 'married life' works!! Bravo, Mohan. A FAVE for me! Thanks, gw
Chutani Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thanx GW. Agree with you. Mohan
Cunningham Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:17 AM
No trust there then lol. Congrats on your win Mohan. Tom
Chutani Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Tom, it's part and parcel of a conjugal life. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 3:16 AM
This is witty and a perfect limerick Mohan. Congratulations on your win :)
Chutani Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 7:48 AM
Aditi, happy that it managed to tickle. Thanks. Mohan
Callus Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Smiling at your originality, Mohan :) Enjoyed ~ Regards // paul
Chutani Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Paul, nice to hear you smiling. Mohan
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:57 PM
ouch! many congrats Mohan:-) hugs jan xx
Chutani Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Jan, thanx.
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:56 PM
A nice effort, Mohan. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Chutani Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:36 PM
Carolyn, thanks for your appreciation and encouragement. Mohan
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 7:49 AM
hahahaha.. Witty and cute. I love this.
Chutani Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Funom, glad you liked it. Mohan
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