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Faithfully we dance

My intricate interlacing strokes, mirror the swaying and interweaving of her skillful dance, she divests playfully, just a bit, she woos me with importunity, yet needs me not, I close in tightly, yet need her not How faithfully we dance

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Date: 4/19/2009 6:28:00 AM
Intricate interlacing strokes..Awesome! Really enjoyed this dance with you:-) Hugs, Robin
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:31:00 AM
beautiful write ... well expressed! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:33:00 PM
Awesome, James! The perpetual dance of coy, playful lovers comes alive in this great poem. Very nice. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carolyn
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