Faithful Day

I can't believe what now is happening!
I thought this was our story's beginning. 
This violent outburst, for stating the fact?!
He lost his mind and us both he attacked!

My friend was seeking advice, 
After her boyfriend and her had a fight.
All I said "If he hit you once he will hit you twice"
And my fiancee lost his mind!

He hit my back several times,
But all that for him didn't suffice!
He went after her and threw her out, 
And that was the moment I had no more doubt.

Divine intervention is what I asked for, 
He shown me who I was planning to settle for. 
Even that minute would've been too late,
He had to leave, there was no room for debate!

Over 10 years have passed since that horrible day, 
I still thank God for not letting me become his pray. 
No women should ever live in fear!
Please seek out help and beware!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 6/21/2020 6:35:00 AM
Pussy Cat, a man who will raise his hand to a woman and smack her around is not a man at all --- he is a low down, low life coward. You were wise to sever ties with him. I will be reading, and responding to your other entries.
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