Faith Amidst Grief

This barren night along dim street
where lamp posts hide drops of gold flakes,
and thorny weeds crack at her feet
to sift death's crumbs, throwing keepsakes.
 
Yesterday's thoughts scream much bolder
alone now, pinned by heart’s lesion
missing groom's compassionate flair;
as anguish sigh in procession.

Fractured mind plays a tortured game
that sorrow drifts without relief,
chasing lost hours in timeless frame
while bleak clouds linger like a thief.

And darkened soul pours acid rain
till beads of moonlight kiss wet eyes,
stars dripping bigger than tears’ stains
to wake faith’s songs, new quests arise.


Grief Contest of Black- Eyed Susan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Nette, , congrats......... SKAT
Adams Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 8:31 AM
stopping by to congratulate you on your win with this beautiful poem :)
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, nette
Davidson Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 4:35 AM
well done and well written Robert(RabCD)
Ryerson Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 8:29 PM
'Yesterday's thoughts scream much bolder'...Oh how I identify my friend! That one line says it all to me...Still tryin to make that last verse a reality! As usual, you nailed it and congrats of course - Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 9:04 AM
I'm pleased to see this one on the winners list, one of my personal favorites for this contest.
Devnath  Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 11:41 AM
Very nice poem read just now. Beautifully worded. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Faith amidst grief is a very powerful force as is your writing Nette.
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:37 AM
You have such a beautiful way with words, my dear Nette! A marvellous poetess you are... love and hugs, Jack xoxox
Adams Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 6:19 AM
wow...love your images in this one... you have crafted a gem here....excellent write! hugs :)
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:36 AM
Excellent. Awesome write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:03 AM
I enjoyed your take on grief, and putting it with faith. Your imagery really denotes the feeling of grief throughout the poem.
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:19 PM
Wow, this is a very good, no, better yet, a very awesome write my friend! You have surely written a tremendously pleasant and splendid poem! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent piece this evening! What a lovely piece, quite the delightful verse, Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Nette...I believe this is my favorite poem of yours to date...and going Into my favorites to read again....there is something special about this one..
Loving Iii Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 3:08 PM
amists a phone call i need that faith right now!!!
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 2:36 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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