Faith

Fame floats about like child's play, And like the wind, soon flees away, Inspiring for short durations day to day. Tried and tested faith builds trust to stay. Heaven belongs to the faithful who kneel to pray.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/9/2023 8:12:00 AM

Nicely done with the monorhyme incorporated. Congratulations Curtis! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2023 11:39:00 AM

This is such a good entry on faith. Reading it again, I wish I had put it a notch higher on the list. For sure, it would have placed higher if you had bolded the first letter of each line. Thanks for giving my contest a try and congrats.

Curtis Johnson
Date: 10/8/2023 12:21:00 PM

Hi, and thanks, Andrea. I am delighted and honored by your comments. I have often sought to 'bold' the first letter. When I transfer from the 'processor', the 'bold' does not paste. Either I do not have that option on the edit page or I just don't know how to do it. Blessings.