Faith


 "Like the silence that screams, cursing solitude... 
whispers of faith sing patiently with prayers" - Regina McIntosh
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There was time when life was a tight rope
Full of problems and tears, every moment unjust
Struggling every second, I found it hard to cope

My Prayers were not answered, on God I lost trust
Felt God was bad, ended all faith and hope
Standing in front of him, harsh words I would thrust

For happiness I began to grope
I was no longer willing to adjust
One day I realised I was a dope

That day myself to God I did entrust
I kneeled down, asked forgiveness for my sin
Felt miserable for all my words, mistrust

Heard his voice speaking from within
I have no choice, punish for sin I must 
You have no choice, endure it with grin

In me please have complete trust
I gave birth to you, I am your kin
To my children I cannot be unjust

I give miseries to end your sin
Nothing can change your plight
Until in the end salvation you win

I understood like stupid I was trying to fight
Eternal Father, God will not do wrong
Of course! My father is always right

Now I endure my miseries, humming a song
I know they will go along until I reach where I belong

17th January 2021

Inspired by : 
Contest Name: Heart Universes
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
Premier contest winner 2nd position
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. God is good. Have a blessed day with God.................
Seeker Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Beautiful consciousness shift, Rama! Superb! Congrats on your win!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Thanks for the wonderful compliment and congratulations. Good night. Take care Rama
Y. Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Hi Rama, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Nice to see you at my page with congratulations. Thanks dear. You too have a great day ahead. God bless! Take care Rama
Mcintosh Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 1:38 AM
Struggles come but God is always God. Congrats and God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 2:35 AM
Thanks. This win surprised me. New form for me. It does boost self esteem when one is placed second among so many great poets. God bless. Take care Rama
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:58 PM
The struggle is eternal -- with all of us, really. Certainly, myself included. Thank you for representing it so well in this poem, Rama. Faith deepens and Love emerges from such 'battles.' Prayer and Hope, Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 7:03 PM
You are right when faith deepens love emerges. Faith and peace. Rama
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