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Faith

"Like the silence that screams, cursing solitude... whispers of faith sing patiently with prayers" - Regina McIntosh ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There was time when life was a tight rope Full of problems and tears, every moment unjust Struggling every second, I found it hard to cope My Prayers were not answered, on God I lost trust Felt God was bad, ended all faith and hope Standing in front of him, harsh words I would thrust For happiness I began to grope I was no longer willing to adjust One day I realised I was a dope That day myself to God I did entrust I kneeled down, asked forgiveness for my sin Felt miserable for all my words, mistrust Heard his voice speaking from within I have no choice, punish for sin I must You have no choice, endure it with grin In me please have complete trust I gave birth to you, I am your kin To my children I cannot be unjust I give miseries to end your sin Nothing can change your plight Until in the end salvation you win I understood like stupid I was trying to fight Eternal Father, God will not do wrong Of course! My father is always right Now I endure my miseries, humming a song I know they will go along until I reach where I belong 17th January 2021 Inspired by : Contest Name: Heart Universes Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Premier contest winner 2nd position

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Date: 2/11/2021 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. God is good. Have a blessed day with God.................
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Date: 2/11/2021 8:30:00 AM
Beautiful consciousness shift, Rama! Superb! Congrats on your win!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/11/2021 9:48:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful compliment and congratulations. Good night. Take care Rama
Date: 2/11/2021 8:23:00 AM
Hi Rama, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/11/2021 9:50:00 AM
Nice to see you at my page with congratulations. Thanks dear. You too have a great day ahead. God bless! Take care Rama
Date: 2/11/2021 1:38:00 AM
Struggles come but God is always God. Congrats and God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 2/11/2021 2:35:00 AM
Thanks. This win surprised me. New form for me. It does boost self esteem when one is placed second among so many great poets. God bless. Take care Rama
Date: 1/17/2021 6:58:00 PM
The struggle is eternal -- with all of us, really. Certainly, myself included. Thank you for representing it so well in this poem, Rama. Faith deepens and Love emerges from such 'battles.' Prayer and Hope, Gershon
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/17/2021 7:03:00 PM
You are right when faith deepens love emerges. Faith and peace. Rama

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