Celeste Gil Poet Blank verse

Fairytail

My smile is broken
The teeth shatter across my lips
Blood spills on the paper letting out my inner most thoughts with pictures 
Some depicting a soul with no smile, music without a rhythm
And quiet laughter
The blood drips until the paper is no longer white but red 
A deep pulsing scarlet, like the nails of witches in fairy tales
My lips are white like the paper once was and my heart is empty but still beats 
I fill my veins with a corpses 
Thick and cold 
I can no longer feel 
I am dead inside

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Skat A August 23, 2015 at 12:16 AM Celeste, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT** Celeste Gil August 23, 2015 at 3:22 AM Thank you so much :-) you're a really sweet poem with really nice words :-)

Bl Devnath August 13, 2015 at 1:04 PM A sad poem beautifully expressed my lovely new poetess friend. Warm welcome to you with this nice 7. Loved always,bl Celeste Gil August 13, 2015 at 3:10 PM thank you so much friend :-) its nice to get such a compliment from such a good poet

Poet Destroyer A August 12, 2015 at 12:15 AM Celeste, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Celeste Gil August 12, 2015 at 2:29 PM thank you so much, its nice to get a welcome from such a great poet :-) and new friend :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2015 at 3:54 AM - A moving poem ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Celeste :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :) Celeste Gil August 11, 2015 at 1:04 PM wow thank you so much for your warm welcome Anne :-) i really do love it already

Skat A August 10, 2015 at 6:21 PM Celeste, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Celeste Gil August 11, 2015 at 1:06 PM thank you SKAT, thats really nice and it feels nice to be welcomed so warmly, *hug* :-) its nice to talk to someone so friendly