Fairytail

My smile is broken The teeth shatter across my lips Blood spills on the paper letting out my inner most thoughts with pictures Some depicting a soul with no smile, music without a rhythm And quiet laughter The blood drips until the paper is no longer white but red A deep pulsing scarlet, like the nails of witches in fairy tales My lips are white like the paper once was and my heart is empty but still beats I fill my veins with a corpses Thick and cold I can no longer feel I am dead inside

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Skat A

Date: 8/23/2015 12:16:00 AM

Celeste, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**

Celeste Gil
Date: 8/23/2015 3:22:00 AM

Thank you so much :-) you're a really sweet poem with really nice words :-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/13/2015 1:04:00 PM

A sad poem beautifully expressed my lovely new poetess friend. Warm welcome to you with this nice 7. Loved always,bl

Celeste Gil
Date: 8/13/2015 3:10:00 PM

thank you so much friend :-) its nice to get such a compliment from such a good poet

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 12:15:00 AM

Celeste, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Celeste Gil
Date: 8/12/2015 2:29:00 PM

thank you so much, its nice to get a welcome from such a great poet :-) and new friend :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2015 3:54:00 AM

- A moving poem ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Celeste :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)

Celeste Gil
Date: 8/11/2015 1:04:00 PM

wow thank you so much for your warm welcome Anne :-) i really do love it already

Skat A

Date: 8/10/2015 6:21:00 PM

Celeste, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Celeste Gil
Date: 8/11/2015 1:06:00 PM

thank you SKAT, thats really nice and it feels nice to be welcomed so warmly, *hug* :-) its nice to talk to someone so friendly