Fairyland

Row after row in or shine,
She grew them where the scattered lay;
Mayflowers, roses, columbine,
A fairyland among decay.
I ran to where her wielded wand
Cast beauty down between dead bark.
Damp earth we combed with clawing hand,
Light fingerplay among the dark;
Then danced upon her magic lawn.
"Choose one, the fairest to your eye.
It's grown for you and you alone;
Then tend till old enough to die."
Till old enough? For it or me?
My longer and my shorter years,
A garden kept on bended knee
From vine and weed, with sweat and tears,
And blooded briar, choking turf;
Till bye and bye, a withered rose;
And this: her hushing voice - "enough!
That was the fairyland you chose." 


David Colquhoun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 26, 2014 at 12:28 AM
My favorite yet of all I have read in the contest. Congratulations on your win. I really like it. Joyce
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February 25, 2014 at 4:53 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,david
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February 25, 2014 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations, David. well done in Giorgio's contest -SKAT
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February 25, 2014 at 3:06 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, David. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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