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Fairy Tale Love

She sparkled with a light of purest love Her beautiful eyes were deep enough, To lose yourself in and bask in bliss Her lips so red and sumptuous they yearned to be kissed, Her figure sculptured in perfect curves It's flow and lines left all in awe This was my Princess who I adored. I was her Prince who offered her the world Put her her on a pedestal on a pedestal under flags unfurled, In our city of Atlantis we had had it all A love so deep it could not be equalled, We shone so bright and resonated grace And as I watched from a distance She would glide around our city state She always took my breath away And turned heads and courted smiles And with her kindness and compassion She managed to beguile. She was enchanting and amazing And was loved by all And I thought our love would be eternal, I never could have foreseen the future in in store The sound and sight of the oceans roar But centuries on, our love continues more And my Princess and I are now royalty of the deep sea Who are part of an oceanic dynasty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/13/2018 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Fauxcroft.. :)
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Date: 10/8/2018 5:27:00 PM
Hi Fauxcroft, This was my kind if fairy tale write. It was exactly what I was looking for. It had a wonderful storyline, Prince and Princess madly in love. Need I say more? Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. PS, I apologize that it took me so long to judge the contest:-) Alexis
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 10/9/2018 6:10:00 AM
I am honored and humbled by your placement and thank you ever so much for reading and appreciating. Faux
Date: 5/27/2018 10:23:00 PM
Very well conceived, crafted, and creative romantic piece that I enjoyed reading! Good luck in the contest! Best regards. Pandita
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 5/28/2018 4:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating and for your kind words.
Date: 5/27/2018 7:15:00 AM
Quite a fairy tale. Should do good in the contest. Enjoyed it.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 5/27/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thank you, the contest is a bit of fun but I love the challenges the contests set.
Date: 5/27/2018 5:11:00 AM
Wonderful love story, wade, with great descriptions.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 5/27/2018 5:12:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating Phil.

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