Evie Beaty Poet Pantoum

Fairy Freckles

Fairy freckles fade with your smile
Once bright as the s’mores summer stars
In midnight.  Then… something captured you.
It took you to a darkness where

Stars once bright as the s’mores summer
Couldn’t be seen.  And… some monster…
It took you to a darkness where
I didn’t even see you, you 

Couldn’t be seen.  And… some monster..
Tortured you, leaving mental scars.
I didn’t even see you, you
Were too good at hiding as it

Tortured you, leaving mental scars.
In midnight… something captured you.  You
Were too good at hiding as your
Fairly freckles faded with your smile.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Beata Agustin September 11, 2026 at 1:36 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2016 at 9:23 PM Evie Beaty, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A August 10, 2015 at 6:46 PM ;) SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2015 at 12:58 PM - A warm welcome to the P Soup, Evie :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A January 25, 2015 at 1:02 AM Hi Evie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A January 24, 2015 at 6:12 AM Evie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT