Deborah Burch Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Fairy Diary: Day 11-- a Picnic

Fairy Diary: Day 11-- A Picnic

When Lolly, Gag, and Lint
Went to a pic-a-nic
They hid behind a tree
And ate the peppermint!
The capers made Gag sick...
Or maybe 'twas the brie!

Everything was grand!
At least I thought so.
Lint got in the jam
And would not let go
(We lent Lint a hand).

Rain soon started.
Biscuits got wet...
Broken hearted?
Oh no! Not yet!

'Till Lolly
Ate them all
up--soggy!

Gag and
Lint, then

Went!

©deborah burch
6/15/2012

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Connie Marcum Wong June 26, 2012 at 2:18 AM Your ending was hilarious. Loved this and see why it made the winners list. Congrats!

Nette Onclaud June 24, 2012 at 9:36 PM love the way this ended, deborah.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi June 24, 2012 at 9:36 AM I'm giggling! You do seem to have that affect on me! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2012 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 22, 2012 at 6:27 PM Congratulations on your winning spot Debs, you are so funny xx

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2012 at 3:46 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Gwendolen Song June 22, 2012 at 2:00 PM Yowza---you mystical writer, YOU!...How quaint and imaginative, Debs....You wrote so well for this contest of David's...Congrats girl! gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2012 at 11:17 AM Hi, Deb~xox~ a wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day (: PD

David Williams June 22, 2012 at 10:55 AM Cap'n Deb, what can I say?.. just excellent..thanks for entering and well done..David

Kim Merryman June 22, 2012 at 10:00 AM This is so cute and whimsical. Congrats on your win, Deborah! Love, Kim

Jonas L. Rozario June 22, 2012 at 9:19 AM Nice humor & rhyming Deborah...well deserved win for you!!! Many congrats!!! Deborah Burch June 22, 2012 at 9:24 AM :-) thank you deat Jonas...

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2012 at 7:52 AM oh yes, I sure remember THIS playful one. One of my favorites in the contest. Congrats on your big win. Deborah Burch June 22, 2012 at 9:25 AM thank you again my dear friend!! :-)

Pace Ink-U-Script June 22, 2012 at 7:48 AM Congrats on your winning poem Deborah!!!! Deborah Burch June 22, 2012 at 9:26 AM thanks G :-)

Sara Kendrick June 21, 2012 at 4:36 PM Cute..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara Deborah Burch June 22, 2012 at 9:29 AM thank you Sara!! hope you are well...love ya...:-)

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2012 at 7:37 PM hahaha. What cute playing on words and clever idea for this to be a fairy diary. A unique entry in the contest! Deborah Burch June 19, 2012 at 8:27 PM lol thank you so much Andrea...:)

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2012 at 5:53 PM Deb, enjoyed..xox~pd Deborah Burch June 19, 2012 at 8:27 PM thanks sweet pd!! :)

Russell Sivey June 16, 2012 at 12:31 PM Ha Ha, I just love the humor of your write! This is a perfectly rhymed poem Deborah! I really enjoyed the elaborately expressed write you have written! This is a spectacular poem my friend! Great work!! Deborah Burch June 16, 2012 at 1:06 PM :-) lol thank you dear Russell...you are sooo kind to me...thanks for cheering my day....love ya, deb