Fairest Flower

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ten lines of seven syllables heavens steps onto the plate
written in tercets highlighting trice the trinity one in the seven steps
standing out alone sometimes the fairest flower deeply holds
ten lines meaning holds perfection in one's eye

You are to me petal soft 
deeply blossoming scarlet rose 
so beautiful within song

Growing within life's Orchard 
One bite cherries burst flavour
fruity inside the kiss held

Where the sunsets born hotly

Loving golden butterflies 
begin to warmly waltz up
inside a heartbeats skip pure

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2016 6:00:00 AM

- A delicate, soft and beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/9/2016 6:28:00 PM

A touch of sexy and full of Sweet romance. Just what a lady would love to read. I HEART it, Liam!

Caroline Smith

Date: 11/6/2016 3:31:00 PM

Absolutely stunning Liam.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/2/2016 11:35:00 PM

This is so gorgeous Liam! 7

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/31/2016 3:05:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^