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Fair Thee Well

Thy fair head is reminiscent of a freefall cascade
Thou art so lovely and undeniably a silent charade
Hark you imposter, thine dewy eyes fool me not
For your impetuous ways I have not easily forgot
Thine misty greys, thou art mine
Yet to no one you have signed
Delusions of grandeur fill up my heart
Yet alas the pain has yet to depart
Clandestinely we loved, through thy soft gentle serenades
Perish me, for my end dear heart continuously debates
Adieu I say, for my end is here my lot be taken
For it is I that your heart has callously forsaken!
Oh the pain it hath endured
T’was that I was better off forlorn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/3/2008 6:36:00 AM
Beautiful, but sad Sonnet. Love your poetry. If this is for the contest good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/3/2008 4:29:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet. I loved every word of this write. I am still trying to master this art form and you have done a wonderful job with this piece.
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Date: 12/3/2008 2:38:00 AM
Is this what you said , when the parking-idiot moved his minivan ????? ....NO !! Hell hath no fury etc.... Well done with a well delivered rhyming piece , Fathima, and tks for your kind comments ....
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