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FAILURE DETOUR

Trapped in meaningless whirling thoughts
Boundaries draped around the body
Unsaid words confined in laughing gear
Dread sentiment flowing in breadbasket
Trembling uncertainty waving inside the stump
Sealed in anticipation of a utopian epoch...

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MB Farookh

March 18, 2024 at 10:15 PM

You have a wonderful, unique style of expressing your thoughts, Radhika. "Boundaries draped around body," this expression conveys so much in different ways. Great start! Many blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2024 at 7:15 AM

- Welcome to poetry soup, Radhika ... a great interesting piece of writing -

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 10, 2024 at 9:53 AM

Thank you:)

Beata Agustin

March 5, 2024 at 9:50 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 6, 2024 at 6:32 AM

Thank you so much. So grateful that you loved the poetry..