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FAILURE DETOUR

Trapped in meaningless whirling thoughts Boundaries draped around the body Unsaid words confined in laughing gear Dread sentiment flowing in breadbasket Trembling uncertainty waving inside the stump Sealed in anticipation of a utopian epoch...

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MB Farookh

Date: 3/18/2024 10:15:00 PM

You have a wonderful, unique style of expressing your thoughts, Radhika. "Boundaries draped around body," this expression conveys so much in different ways. Great start! Many blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2024 7:15:00 AM

- Welcome to poetry soup, Radhika ... a great interesting piece of writing -

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/10/2024 9:53:00 AM

Thank you:)

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/5/2024 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/6/2024 6:32:00 AM

Thank you so much. So grateful that you loved the poetry..

Aly Bahr

Date: 3/3/2024 11:22:00 PM

this is very meaningful. Touches me deep. Thank you for sharing.

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/4/2024 3:53:00 AM

Thanks Aly. Grateful you loved it:)

RADHIKA AGARWAL

Date: 3/3/2024 10:22:00 PM

Show some love:)