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Failed the First Week

Speak the words of truth Till you are long in the tooth Look them in the eye And tell them no lie A friend will know When a tell does show Your hips will grow width Though you take the fifth You fell from grace When the sweets you did taste Too good to pass For a year… much too rash!! Written for David’s “One to One” poetry contest (Subject: A failed New Year’s resolution, but not mine !! lol )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/11/2013 7:28:00 AM
Quite a few people can relate to this one Debra :)
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Date: 1/10/2013 11:15:00 AM
Love it! Admittedly, I can relate.
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:27:00 PM
I bought a slim mirror the other day. It tells me what ever I want it to say. I had pancakes for breakfast, a braut for lunch. Snacked inbetween, just had to munch. Suppertime came and I ate some more. Now that slim mirror told me to get a bigger door. Good luck in the contest Debra. :)
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/9/2013 8:32:00 PM
Laughing out loud at this !!! How cute !!! You need to post that !!
Date: 1/9/2013 1:18:00 PM
the proverbial "moment on the lips"
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/9/2013 8:32:00 PM
lol true !!
Date: 1/9/2013 5:28:00 AM
Lol. Yes, already. Love it, Debra. Good luck with David's contest!
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/9/2013 8:32:00 PM
Thank you !!
Date: 1/8/2013 8:11:00 PM
hahaha, a nice funny one for his contest. AWesome.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/8/2013 9:38:00 PM
Thanks for reading this !! I don't think many read them anymore. They just click and move on...
Date: 1/8/2013 6:25:00 PM
This is a perfect entry into David's contest Debra! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful and spectacular poem this evening! What a stupendous piece, Great Work!!
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