Failed Promises

Failed promises 

You promised to love me more than I do
Treat like a child
Handle my heart like an uncooked egg
Not to listen to any foes

You promised to accept life defeat,to prove immortality of our love
Be with me,even at the peril time
Never to leave my side 
Not to hurt me like others 

You promise to drag down moon before my feet
Take me to that hiding paradise
Be my estacy and forever fantasy  
All this promises was made in the morning 
Hurts me most,seeing all been failed before noon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 9:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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