Failed Act

Confusing emotions feel in vain,
But loves so strong, for this one.
Feeling your pain, their pain, all pain,
And my life not your silly pun.
I am true, faithful, and promised.
Heartfelt for all, feelings strong,
And burry the ones that coexist.
Still they never get along.
So much sadness I feel, and see,
Left here to die wasted cheeped.
Under the gun, like a parolee,
Through this darkness, I have cheeped.
I feel all that you still drain,
And eat all your wrongs, you make.
Leaving behind a tragic life bloodstain,
Remembering this heart is what you forsake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 27, 2012 at 3:11 AM
Niiiiice- much enjoyed!
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