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Faerie Dreamboats By the Lake

the verge of blossoms, a spumoni serenade ~ faerie dreamboats by the lake. the daylight fusion of hues dallying with love ~ mirror fancy ~ introvert & extrovert ~ her wings wrapped ‘round a rosebud. his heartstrings skim lake’s surface. Monet’s berry-vanilla... ...silver dollars swim about. bright butterflies in stomach… their tiny eyes magnetized. ~ the north and south pole ~ a love at first flight ~ his wings shy, hers so pretty. she gently draws him from his water cave. he sketches lines on her palm ~ a silent poem. ~ dew drops on lips so winsome ~ 12/28/2020
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Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 5:31 PM
'a spumoni serenade,'... ' her wings wrapped 'round a rosebud,' -- These are just delightful turns of phrase and make for gorgeous imagery. Enchantingly written, Kim. HNY! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much! HNY, my fine friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Your imagery will parade in my imagination for a long time Kim. Bravo!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Yay! You inspire me,!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Loved your descriptions. There is a serene atmosphere in your poem. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 10:45 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Wonderful images you painted, Kim, in this superb write. Lovely details with feelings like---he sketches lines on her palm ~a silent poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
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