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the verge of blossoms, a spumoni serenade ~ faerie dreamboats by the lake. the daylight fusion of hues dallying with love ~ mirror fancy ~ introvert & extrovert ~ her wings wrapped ‘round a rosebud. his heartstrings skim lake’s surface. Monet’s berry-vanilla... ...silver dollars swim about. bright butterflies in stomach… their tiny eyes magnetized. ~ the north and south pole ~ a love at first flight ~ his wings shy, hers so pretty. she gently draws him from his water cave. he sketches lines on her palm ~ a silent poem. ~ dew drops on lips so winsome ~ 12/28/2020

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Date: 12/30/2020 5:31:00 PM
'a spumoni serenade,'... ' her wings wrapped 'round a rosebud,' -- These are just delightful turns of phrase and make for gorgeous imagery. Enchantingly written, Kim. HNY! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/30/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much! HNY, my fine friend!
Date: 12/29/2020 2:23:00 PM
Your imagery will parade in my imagination for a long time Kim. Bravo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 3:33:00 PM
Yay! You inspire me,!
Date: 12/29/2020 10:20:00 AM
Loved your descriptions. There is a serene atmosphere in your poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Date: 12/29/2020 7:20:00 AM
Wonderful images you painted, Kim, in this superb write. Lovely details with feelings like---he sketches lines on her palm ~a silent poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)

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