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Faerie-Child -HC

one ballerina tiptoe-twirls with two pink shoes three sweet pirouettes Turning the key of a music box - one...two...three. Lovely, tall and full of grace - true faerie-child esprit. 3/1/2019 Charliecoup Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 3/7/2019 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet,Kim, containing a lot of feeling and imagery. ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Hugs...Kim!
Date: 3/7/2019 9:18:00 AM
I love it Kim! :) Congratulations on your top win! xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Maureen!
Date: 3/7/2019 4:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Kim :) -
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, dear Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/6/2019 2:55:00 PM
glad to see this gem place high. Congrats, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Date: 3/6/2019 1:23:00 PM
Love this one, Kim. I pictured that little music box turning. Well-done! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/8/2019 6:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charles!
Date: 3/1/2019 7:17:00 PM
This makes me recall my old music box with that tip toe swirling ballerina. Utterly charming, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2019 8:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim
Date: 3/1/2019 2:13:00 PM
Excellent symbolism. I could see her turning on her tip toes. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2019 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! God bless you too!
Date: 3/1/2019 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful. For the first time I remembered once wanting to be a ballerina.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2019 8:27:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/1/2019 9:06:00 AM
Bravo, Kim. An absolute FAVE.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2019 8:26:00 PM
Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim
Date: 3/1/2019 8:36:00 AM
Enchanting poem! Surely top placement dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs..Kim
Date: 3/1/2019 8:15:00 AM
Reads like a good contender in the contest. I can picture the scene. We all can dream of being a ballerina even if not ballerina material. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2019 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, dear Sara!