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Faerie-Child -Hc

one ballerina
tiptoe-twirls with two pink shoes
three sweet pirouettes

Turning the key of a music box - one...two...three.
Lovely, tall and full of grace - true faerie-child esprit.

3/1/2019
Charliecoup Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper Date: 3/7/2019 1:22:00 PM Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet,Kim, containing a lot of feeling and imagery. ... Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/8/2019 6:17:00 PM Thanks so much, Eve! Hugs...Kim!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 3/7/2019 9:18:00 AM I love it Kim! :) Congratulations on your top win! xomo Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/8/2019 6:16:00 PM Thank you, sweet Maureen!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2019 4:45:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/8/2019 6:16:00 PM Thank you, dear Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2019 2:55:00 PM glad to see this gem place high. Congrats, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/8/2019 6:13:00 PM Thanks so much, Andrea!

Charles Messina Date: 3/6/2019 1:23:00 PM Love this one, Kim. I pictured that little music box turning. Well-done! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/8/2019 6:13:00 PM Thanks so much, Charles!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/1/2019 7:17:00 PM This makes me recall my old music box with that tip toe swirling ballerina. Utterly charming, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2019 8:28:00 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Judy Ball Date: 3/1/2019 2:13:00 PM Excellent symbolism. I could see her turning on her tip toes. Love it. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2019 8:27:00 PM Thank you, Judy! God bless you too!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/1/2019 9:47:00 AM Beautiful. For the first time I remembered once wanting to be a ballerina. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2019 8:27:00 PM Thank you!

Line Gauthier Date: 3/1/2019 9:06:00 AM Bravo, Kim. An absolute FAVE. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2019 8:26:00 PM Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/1/2019 8:36:00 AM Enchanting poem! Surely top placement dearest, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2019 8:25:00 PM Thank you, my friend! Hugs..Kim

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/1/2019 8:15:00 AM Reads like a good contender in the contest. I can picture the scene. We all can dream of being a ballerina even if not ballerina material. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/1/2019 7:39:00 PM Thank you, dear Sara!