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My Great, Great, Great Great, Great Uncle Jim

Blowing off the dusty dust Of my old, old family portrait album I see, in the beginning of beginnings, There’s a whole lot of me, me, me me and me Baby me, toddler me, goofy me, cutie me School photos up to my Senior year me Dispersed amongst them are family occasions Like Birthdays, Christmas, and the such My favorites are the goofy, unpretentious ones The LIVE and not people posing picture ones That end up framed and hung up on the wall Looking lost amongst the many, many other ones Then, there’s the Big Vanilla envelope: A Great, Great time capsule of ancestry and all A Great, Great graveyard of black and whites One especially catches my eye, sending chills down my back There stands a man, older than dirt That looks like he’s wearing my bamboo made shirt Not only do I look exactly like him Looking back at me is that same foolish grin And so I have to look on the back to see who it is But I can barely make out his name And yet it turns out, He’s my Great, Great, Great Great, Great Uncle Jim

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Date: 9/13/2024 10:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem, loved this.
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Date: 9/13/2024 2:48:00 PM
I will never be able to write anything as beautiful as this. I cannot relate. There is no vault of pictures of before, nor will there be of the after; there will be no Grand nor Great, Let alone Great, Great, Great, Great, Great, anything. I am glad you cherish your Great, Great, Great, Great, Great Uncle Jim and his same foolish grin.
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Date: 9/13/2024 6:28:00 AM
Wow how incredible to find an ancestor who resembles you. That must feel great. I enjoyed reading this entry for Ink's contest, Benjamin.
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Date: 9/11/2024 2:33:00 AM
Gosh. This hit me. A lovely poem. I recently had to trawl through that same manila envelope stash to discover black and white photos of Dad (and Mum) that I wish we had been able to discuss while they were still here. There were tears and laughter and, as for you, surprises. So many questions though, so many unanswered questions. Blessings S:) x
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