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The days and time are unimportant they were real long ago and have become fading photographs kept in my mind pictures held onto like prison bars with no escape memories I've folded in time some are of lovers, some are of lost friends some are of places I'll never see again they're pinned to the spokes of time's turning wheel they come round and round flickering shadows and shaded silhouettes endlessly spinning covered in ashes traveling through time something to think about, there to remind something to see when the mind is alone pictures of yesterday that remain fading away until they are gone like dying grapes on a dead vine becoming memories of memories I won't remember

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Date: 10/5/2024 11:42:00 PM
Dear frederick, what a deeply moving and beautiful poem woven in such a seamless manner! I absolutely love how youve started the poem and ended it too. Especially lines such as “ some are of lovers, some are of lost friends some are of places I'll never see again“ so evocative and soul stirring! And i think many can also resonate with those words youv delivered “ fading away until they are gone like dying grapes on a dead vine“ a very creative simile! Love that! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/10/2024 1:06:00 PM
Yes, a journey back in time... some things are remembered and others have been forgotten a long time ago... a lovely poem - Best wishes in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 9/10/2024 1:01:00 PM
this kind of melancholy digs inside the soul, frederick...wonderfully scribed!
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Date: 9/10/2024 12:15:00 PM
You capture the theme really well and I can feel the angst in your words.. dying grapes on a dead vine.... that is deep imagery.
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