Fading Lucidity

Dwindling minds
breeds clarity,
exhaling paved trepidation, 
as gilded moon tides 
shadow my fading lucidity.
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February 7, 2025 at 11:01 PM
Ah my beautiful soul sis! Iv missed having you here on soup! And i absolutely love the way youv written this in such a poignant and soul stirring manner, expressing such deep emotions in such eloquence, your wordplay here is profound and I especially love the lines "as gilded moon tides shadow my fading lucidity." Speaks volumes to my soul! Welcome back! And i hope to see you post more! Sending you light always
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