Fading Love

Love Loses Lustre,
As Age Agrees Acrimoniously;
Life Later Larks Liveryless:
Greying, Goaded,Garbagelike.Gee! God's Gracious Graveyard.
                                      
                                                                  ---- Princefreakasso
                                                                       (Artist and Poet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Duncan Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:10 PM
Good poem about growing old.
Jenkins Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 10:12 AM
lOVE IT! Awesome!
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December 8, 2009 at 5:56 AM
Good use of alliteration, Prince. However, I, being somewhat old, must defend the luster of love (not passion!) and say that love matures and shines stronger and brighter with age. (I didn't see your art, yet!?!?! Love to you. Happily, Dane Ann (soup mail)
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Nicely done Alliteration. I don't necessarily agree with what you are saying here. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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