Fading Hibiscus

Fading pink Petals, 
Resolute to die,drooping 
Towards gravel grave.
Sprinklers cast,their last goodbye,
Daybreak:whites now your color.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 6, 2016 at 2:58 AM
This is a good Tanka, meaning I like it despite my inexperience with that form. I enjoy the line 'white now the new colour, since all colours mingle to white...Many wishes, Kai
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