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Fading Hand

It's been ten years from the day our eyes linked our first hand interaction forming the powerful foundation that is now fading dark mist divides us before I'm gone forever I put up my hand and say three final words "We never met."

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Date: 8/23/2023 11:52:00 AM
A powerful ending to your poem. The idea of a creeping estrangement (+ loss) from the first eye-hand interaction is strongly conveyed. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 10/5/2023 5:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment! Have a great day!

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