Fading Embers

She ran into the darkness of the woodland
  The silvery moon cast shadows on the pathway
   She appeared like a magical mirage
    Her long white dress floated
     creating a fairy like vision
       She twirled in the moonlight 
        star dust glowing around her

  She lost her beloved
   He had fallen into the arms of another
    In her heart she felt no one could take his place
     Lost and confused she dashed for solitude
      and in the quietness of cold forest
       She recalls the heartbreaking words spoken
        The music, the thrill all the magic gone

   Lost never to make him her own
   Those magic moments gone
    She clutches the strings of her heart
    Words that hit deep in the soul
     The fire that once burned bright
      Now embers fading in the night.
       Fading dreams that did not last
           Time had run out to fast.

20/04/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Gosh, Phyllis, it flows so beautifully, I was not even noting it was free verse. This is an sad but enchanting write.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Hmmm, I see you have put up several lately that i have not seen. Don't have much time, but I want to see at least two more. Thanks for seeing mine. Now I will read this one.
Babcock Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem Fading Embers. love phyl
Makama Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:55 PM
Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7
Babcock Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Somehow the comment got put under my name and posted. Not sure how that happens but thanks for your comment. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 2:54 PM
- A heart that is hurt, touching and heartbreaking (7) - This is beautiful, dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Thanks Anne Lise this is written from a picture Shar had posted one night and I got the idea to write a poem with it. love phyl
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