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Fading Away

Lost in thy abyss Frozen in time Only to lose my life Never felt so cold Failed attempts to breathe Death grips my soul Fading away now Swallowed in shadows Darkness consumes my eyes I never knew life

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 11:19:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Chronicle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Chronicle Arcadia
Date: 1/30/2012 10:35:00 AM

thank you

William Crocker

Date: 1/28/2012 1:01:00 PM

Arcadia,Very interesting write.Beautifully done.Your name takes me back to Arcadia where I taught elementary school for 11 yrs..I had a number of students that published poems in the School district book.Crossfox

Chronicle Arcadia
Date: 1/30/2012 10:36:00 AM

Thanks for reading