Fading Away

Lost in thy abyss
Frozen in time
Only to lose my life
Never felt so cold
Failed attempts to breathe
Death grips my soul 
Fading away now
Swallowed in shadows
Darkness consumes my eyes
I never knew life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 11:19 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Chronicle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Arcadia Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 10:35 AM
thank you
Crocker Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Arcadia,Very interesting write.Beautifully done.Your name takes me back to Arcadia where I taught elementary school for 11 yrs..I had a number of students that published poems in the School district book.Crossfox
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January 30, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Thanks for reading
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