Fading

Fading
faster
falling
and fading
into you,
beneath you.
I fade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ehigiator Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 11:44 PM
Deep piece here, You love is pouring out like a river overflowing. GB, Always, Tyesha
Rhinem Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Smile~Very short but to the point! To the point, of profoundly deepened love! Smile~Excellent write dear Lisa Barton!:) But, make sure your sure before you fall to far dear?!~"Warmth & Love To You & Yours, John!:)
De La Keur Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 9:57 PM
Such emotion agreat write. Aleerand intrigue in this poem,
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