Fades Time

time fades us all like old parchment, till it becomes personality time, the prettiest thorn mongst the roses wilt have you a laughing just fine Don it all comes down to the inner voice, your spirit onboard has the choice, to be a grumpy Mole, or enjoy being old, personality is the force, who rides upon your horse, where laughter doth unfold...

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/3/2016 11:42:00 AM

Good morning... I like your inner voice. The last stanza can be read backward as well as forward... try it... Cheers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 10:45:00 PM

I don't like being grumpy. I love the rhyming comment. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/12/2016 10:40:00 AM

I take anything you have to say as a compliment. I'm a great admire of your poetry and friendship. Pd

Don Johnson
Date: 2/12/2016 12:27:00 AM

not lecturing you babe. enjoy life hey

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 6:14:00 PM

Hi, Don, I love my character in and out. Except when I haven't had A Dr Pepepr. :) Awesome verse... Love the connection. LINDA

Don Johnson
Date: 2/11/2016 7:16:00 PM

it all comes down to the inner voice, your spirit onboard has the choice, to be a grumpy Mole, or enjoy being old, personality is the force, who rides upon your horse, where laughter doth unfold...