Fades Time

time fades us all like old parchment, till it becomes personality time, the prettiest thorn mongst the roses wilt have you a laughing just fine Don it all comes down to the inner voice, your spirit onboard has the choice, to be a grumpy Mole, or enjoy being old, personality is the force, who rides upon your horse, where laughter doth unfold...
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Salehi Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Good morning... I like your inner voice. The last stanza can be read backward as well as forward... try it... Cheers
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:45 PM
I don't like being grumpy. I love the rhyming comment. LINDA
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:40 AM
I take anything you have to say as a compliment. I'm a great admire of your poetry and friendship. Pd
Johnson Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 12:27 AM
not lecturing you babe. enjoy life hey
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Hi, Don, I love my character in and out. Except when I haven't had A Dr Pepepr. :) Awesome verse... Love the connection. LINDA
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 7:16 PM
it all comes down to the inner voice, your spirit onboard has the choice, to be a grumpy Mole, or enjoy being old, personality is the force, who rides upon your horse, where laughter doth unfold...
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