Faded Patina

Sun from the window, shines gold on my grain
With a faded patina, I have come home again
I was broken and shabby, after years all alone
Stored in the rafters, so lost and afraid
You have dusted my cobwebs, and repaired a split rail
There was love in your touch...since the day you unveiled
Discovered me hiding in the damp attic gloom
I felt so abandoned, in my dark dusty tomb

A remnant of childhood, from those days long ago
You have restored me to life, to be worthy and new
Do you remember my rhythm, and my creaky squeak croon?
When she rocked you at midnight, softly humming a tune
You sat in my warm arms, under a soft velvet moon 

While you dusted my bones, and shined clean my face
Did your memories fall back to that magical place?
Where the world was your oyster, with such sweet childhood charms
You were held to her breast, in her soft loving arms?
Sweet nights spent together when the whole world was kind?

Now the rhythmic thump of my rails on the floor
Will return all those moments, for reflection once more
You will feel on your face, and I on my grain
Sun's warming shine through old window glass panes
Wherever you are, that old world, or new...
      To be home again, is to be here with you....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 5:07 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol
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July 3, 2011 at 11:00 AM
I really like this one Carrie-Congrats. to you :) Happy 4th of July :)
Taylor Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have4 a great Fourth. xxxRalph
Onclaud Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 8:41 AM
carrie, i love the whole mood of this piece... my fondest congrats on your award with matching huggs! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in Yard Sale.. with this touching write .. enjoy ..luv..
Wesley Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Such pictures for the mind, tender and nostalgic.
Peranteau Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Ah, the ol' rocking chair ! I hope I'm right about this fantastic write dear poet, if not, it sure did remind me of those days of yore ! Wonderful write Carrie ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! much love, james
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 11:33 AM
you sure know how to arrest the senses, carrie.... breathless reflections! :) huggs, nette
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