Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Faded In New

By Michael J Falotico
For "Brians Contest"

                                      
                                        My words and exressions are like faded 
                                                      pictures in a locket..                                    
                                         Like folded pieces of paper in my pocket.
                                    
                                        They are so hard to read as some letters
                                                          where set free..
                                           Although a black and white image that
                                                        for now will just be..

                                    The clarity of my intensions no longer as strong..
                                               But soon it shall breathe life and
                                                          hum a new song..

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Sara Kendrick July 8, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Juanita Warden July 6, 2011 at 9:25 PM congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

Wilma Neels July 6, 2011 at 12:35 PM Sometimes when things fade in the new, it is most appreciated.. Congratulations on your awesome win and for the smiles your provided with you comment earlier, love ya Wilma

Nette Onclaud July 6, 2011 at 12:26 PM you are unstoppable, michael... cheery congrats on your special win :) huggs!

Barbara Gorelick July 6, 2011 at 6:27 AM Congrats Michael...I can relate to this one. BG

Russell Smith July 6, 2011 at 5:32 AM congratulations on your winning entry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 6, 2011 at 5:25 AM Congrats Michael on your super 5th place win with this magnificent entry ..awesome and amazing as always my W.K. as your J.G. so appreciates your lovely words always..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 6, 2011 at 4:21 AM Congratulations Michael for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

M.I.A . July 5, 2011 at 12:44 AM you opened it beautifully! enjoyed reading your soul today and thank you for stopping by. sempre. Mia

Dinda Minardi July 3, 2011 at 8:13 AM Wow... I like the title.. Faded in new... I also like the optimistic in this poem! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 3, 2011 at 7:38 AM new songs are beautiful Michael as is this lovely poetry from u .. vivid expressions held so dear and so tenderly..words in pocket and locket.. extremely emotional luv.. your Jersey Girl in tear duct mode luv.. so so tender..your new song awaits..forever and always ..luv.. Michael J. Falotico July 3, 2011 at 8:08 AM Thank you Linda (Jersey Girl).... Your constant understanding of my poems is always admired and puts me in awe... love Michael

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2011 at 10:16 PM I can't think of that name when you say something like faded and new together. Someone did a contest on it once. something like a paradox, but it was different than that word. Anyway, that's what this one brings to my mind. this is a unique way to express breathing life back into the old, "Michael. Is it for a contest?

Carolyn Devonshire July 2, 2011 at 2:49 PM Perhaps we have something in common here, Michael. I often scribble ideas on bits of paper (even cocktail napkins) when an idea strikes. Later I look at them and wonder where I was going with them. As you say, though, the intentions meant something at the time and inspiration always comes around again. Thank you for your response. I will focus on one special person. Love, Carolyn

Joe Maverick July 2, 2011 at 2:25 PM A tale of (the eternal) a new take on a timeless theme and a lesson in hope.. pretty good Michael..

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2011 at 1:02 PM wow, a lofty piece yet keeping it grounded, michael... greeat emotions well expressed.. shine on! :) hugggs, nette Michael J. Falotico July 2, 2011 at 1:34 PM Thank you Nette, I guess I figure like love, words will find there way.....Your constant support means the world to me.... hugggg back to you!!...luv Michael