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Faded In New

By Michael J Falotico For "Brians Contest" My words and exressions are like faded pictures in a locket.. Like folded pieces of paper in my pocket. They are so hard to read as some letters where set free.. Although a black and white image that for now will just be.. The clarity of my intensions no longer as strong.. But soon it shall breathe life and hum a new song..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2011 3:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/6/2011 9:25:00 PM

congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/6/2011 12:35:00 PM

Sometimes when things fade in the new, it is most appreciated.. Congratulations on your awesome win and for the smiles your provided with you comment earlier, love ya Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2011 12:26:00 PM

you are unstoppable, michael... cheery congrats on your special win :) huggs!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/6/2011 6:27:00 AM

Congrats Michael...I can relate to this one. BG

Russell Smith

Date: 7/6/2011 5:32:00 AM

congratulations on your winning entry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2011 5:25:00 AM

Congrats Michael on your super 5th place win with this magnificent entry ..awesome and amazing as always my W.K. as your J.G. so appreciates your lovely words always..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2011 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations Michael for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

M.I.A .

Date: 7/5/2011 12:44:00 AM

you opened it beautifully! enjoyed reading your soul today and thank you for stopping by. sempre. Mia

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/3/2011 8:13:00 AM

Wow... I like the title.. Faded in new... I also like the optimistic in this poem! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2011 7:38:00 AM

new songs are beautiful Michael as is this lovely poetry from u .. vivid expressions held so dear and so tenderly..words in pocket and locket.. extremely emotional luv.. your Jersey Girl in tear duct mode luv.. so so tender..your new song awaits..forever and always ..luv..

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 7/3/2011 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Linda (Jersey Girl).... Your constant understanding of my poems is always admired and puts me in awe... love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 10:16:00 PM

I can't think of that name when you say something like faded and new together. Someone did a contest on it once. something like a paradox, but it was different than that word. Anyway, that's what this one brings to my mind. this is a unique way to express breathing life back into the old, "Michael. Is it for a contest?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/2/2011 2:49:00 PM

Perhaps we have something in common here, Michael. I often scribble ideas on bits of paper (even cocktail napkins) when an idea strikes. Later I look at them and wonder where I was going with them. As you say, though, the intentions meant something at the time and inspiration always comes around again. Thank you for your response. I will focus on one special person. Love, Carolyn

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/2/2011 2:25:00 PM

A tale of (the eternal) a new take on a timeless theme and a lesson in hope.. pretty good Michael..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2011 1:02:00 PM

wow, a lofty piece yet keeping it grounded, michael... greeat emotions well expressed.. shine on! :) hugggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 7/2/2011 1:34:00 PM

Thank you Nette, I guess I figure like love, words will find there way.....Your constant support means the world to me.... hugggg back to you!!...luv Michael