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Faded Away

As nightfall creeps in a man of 30 stands alone with a heavy burden. Not knowing what to do he floats through life and time Heartbroken, and still afraid of what the future holds. Staring out his window he stands mesmerized by memories of the one he loved who never could love him back. Past memories haunt him until his world comes tumbling down before his eyes. He's existing but not really living and will unknowingly die soon. Lack of enthusiasm killed the spirit that made him happy years ago; not enough conscience numbed the soul. Whatever happened to the young man to make him grow so old?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 5:27:00 PM
Growing old in the prime of life. Sad one, Margaret. A nice pen picture
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:55:00 PM
Feel the pain and longing for time past and now to old to change. Excellent piece.
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