Fade To Black

Ever feel like theres no way out and your world
is dark with doom?resembling a ticking bomb just
waiting to go boom!no peace or comfort in your 
thoughts just constant caotical stress.
wondering once again how i got in such a mess.
filled with dreadful emotions and fueled by
primal fear. you want to cry and wail out loud 
and shed those angry tears.but knowing deep 
inside nothings bound to help you through.
you start to become negative in everything
you do.starting to realize the depth of your
hole.it litterally sends shivers deep down
in your soul.you begin to flirt with mortality
thinking it`s your only way out.on the verge
of experiencing what death is all about.trying 
to convince yourself it`ll be painless with a gun.
and you`ll finally be free of stressful pain when
all is said and done.in the final moment of your
life you take time to think way back.as fond 
memories as a child starts to fade to black.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 2:34 PM
meaningful and deep write, mark
Johnson Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:21 PM
This was very deep, but an enjoyable read. Welcome to soup(:
Jackson Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 10:55 AM
VERY DEEP.. AND VERY WELL-WRITTEN*SNAP,SNAP,SNAP*:~)
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