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Fade To Black

Ever feel like theres no way out and your world is dark with doom?resembling a ticking bomb just waiting to go boom!no peace or comfort in your thoughts just constant caotical stress. wondering once again how i got in such a mess. filled with dreadful emotions and fueled by primal fear. you want to cry and wail out loud and shed those angry tears.but knowing deep inside nothings bound to help you through. you start to become negative in everything you do.starting to realize the depth of your hole.it litterally sends shivers deep down in your soul.you begin to flirt with mortality thinking it`s your only way out.on the verge of experiencing what death is all about.trying to convince yourself it`ll be painless with a gun. and you`ll finally be free of stressful pain when all is said and done.in the final moment of your life you take time to think way back.as fond memories as a child starts to fade to black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2011 2:34:00 PM
meaningful and deep write, mark
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:21:00 PM
This was very deep, but an enjoyable read. Welcome to soup(:
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Date: 5/11/2011 10:55:00 AM
VERY DEEP.. AND VERY WELL-WRITTEN*SNAP,SNAP,SNAP*:~)
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