Fade Out

The lights no longer here. Inside my heart, silence and dark. Misery has taken my life. My desire of believing. How could I mourn these days? I lead my soul to emptiness. None to be blamed but Me.

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Poet Tacito

Date: 6/13/2013 9:39:00 AM

Dark, yet strong. We all have a pilot light. Make it a fire, light up the sky. Excellent work!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/13/2013 8:08:00 AM

We all go through different phases in life...soon the darkness will turn to light. I love how intense your words are in these 7 lines. I certainly can testify to this. Enjoyed!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Shirley Candy
Date: 6/13/2013 12:56:00 PM

Thank you for the kind review, I.U.S. Very appreciate it.. ^_^