Hus Sain Poet Abecedarian

Fade Night

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          In the darkness of fade night
     There are millions of stars hiding
        feelings in the black huge scar
      Still there is a bright star making
             the sky look amazing so far
  Its too fascinating while staring at the 
                     brighten star,
      Its like one is dancing with angels
                      in the sky,
     And some are feeling pessimist in
                  the sky full of stars
  Then what comes next, makes everyone
                    blushing so far
   The darkness go hide as the time pass
 And what goes down, takes the darkness down
           The first ray of dawn, fills the
        black scars just like the bright star
 Everything looks amazing again, just like
          the bright star in the fade sky

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Faraz Ajmal November 10, 2017 at 6:18 AM A very beautiful written poem, you ve explained the scene and your imaginations beautifully, just carry on writing and I ll be looking for your poems, well matter of fact, I really like to look at bright sky, it s something I enjoyed, looking at sky in nights, looking at bright stars, anyway I m also from Pakistan and can you read my poems as well and let me know how they are