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Fade Night

UNSUPPORTED CODE In the darkness of fade night There are millions of stars hiding feelings in the black huge scar Still there is a bright star making the sky look amazing so far Its too fascinating while staring at the brighten star, Its like one is dancing with angels in the sky, And some are feeling pessimist in the sky full of stars Then what comes next, makes everyone blushing so far The darkness go hide as the time pass And what goes down, takes the darkness down The first ray of dawn, fills the black scars just like the bright star Everything looks amazing again, just like the bright star in the fade sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/10/2017 6:18:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve explained the scene and your imaginations beautifully, just carry on writing and I ll be looking for your poems, well matter of fact, I really like to look at bright sky, it s something I enjoyed, looking at sky in nights, looking at bright stars, anyway I m also from Pakistan and can you read my poems as well and let me know how they are
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