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We all know as humans chopping down forests through greed filled hands destroying the filtering system that which brings wildlife a safe haven to breathe and nest and multiply feeding us Man has a poisonous ugly appetite for the earths destruction messengers from the gods palace are speaking now from the deep ocean's bed oars they surface dead remains to say Endangered species disappear forever lost from this beautiful garden ancient trees that gave us air to breathe for centuries cut down respect they absorb masses of water as now levels rise Reading science reports from the effect of deforestation many species of insects have fallen drastically soon all we will have is crows picking dead bones and the hounds bleeding our life source dry Uncaring we should be planting new life every day with love instead killing is all these mobsters are any good at criminals backwards peddling will never see a future

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Date: 2/5/2019 7:39:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Very powerful poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned. So true! I'm with you!This worlds so evil n' corrup n' getting worse each day!It breaks my heart!All signs of the last days according to the Bible.So happy God wins over all evil, when Jesus returns in the end.Liam, prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray to God now more than ever before for everyone n' all.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive, safe n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 2/4/2019 5:13:00 AM
So do you live in a tree or a house? LOL
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Date: 2/3/2019 3:08:00 PM
Nicely penned old pal!
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Date: 2/3/2019 7:23:00 AM
I agree with your sentiments in this poem..you are a great advocate for preserving nature..trees are essential for human survival..well written poem, Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/3/2019 7:44:00 AM
thank you kindly vijay i pray your week is blessed

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